Her Angel Wings: A Short Poem
622011 Charcoal Drawing
Inspiration
When I was sixteen a beautiful girl, a classmate, a friend passed away in an accident. This short poem was something I wrote, expressing an unfamiliar pain. I had never mourned for a friend and as I had found in most my troubled times, writing a little something can help sooth the soul.
Her Angel Wings
(A Poem)
This rainy day
fits my mood.
Sorrow fills me,
anger too.
With angel wings
& a devil's sting,
she escaped
life's petty things.
So free me too
from this burdened spell.
They praised her life.
Life is hell.
Send me comfort
in my war,
my wounded spirit
is much too sore.
My legs are weary,
my heads gone faint.
Deliver your legions.
Send your saints.
Quote:
"Has this world been so kind
that you should leave with regret?
There are better things ahead
than any we leave behind."
-C.S Lewis-
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Nicely done. Voting this Up and Beautiful.
Thanks for the comment Sue. I'm sorry to hear about that terrible news. What a tough thing to go through. Take care.
A beautiful, wonderful and heartfelt tribute to your friend.
I recently discovered that a childhood friend of mine died of cancer last year. It doesn't seem real.
Voted up and away.
Hey thanks a lot Justin. I appreciate it.
this is terrific, Brian. I'll be sharing this
Aw thank you so much loonies.
very nice and beautiful poetry...I felt it while reading it...thank you fro sharing to us this very beautiful poem...
Thanks a lot Deborah.
I love your sweet sad poetry.. this is so awesome and beautiful. I know how it feels to lose a friend.
Blessings to you
I voted way up
Debbie
Thanks Ella. Yeah it sat on a scrappy piece of paper in my closet for years. Glad I could share it.
This is really beautiful, i'm amazed you wrote this at 16.
I'm glad you all liked it. Thanks to each one of you for taking the time to stop by, I appreciate it
Your friend is smiling :) such feeling real and raw ~ hoping you are comforted with peace soon
This is very nice Lvdoni5. Beautiful work. Thank you for sharing.
Wow. Can't think of anything to say that will really say it - but WOW, way to go!
So poignant! The pain is palpable!
Your heart knows my heart........
This piece mirrors my heart and is beautiful. Thank you.
This is such a touching tribute to your friend LVidoni5, and says so much about you too. Regards, snakeslane
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Hey Thanks a lot!